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WALT: Write a letter to a camp parent or camp leader Use paragraphs for each new idea Use interesting words Edit our writing with a buddy to make it even better Reflect on our writing using a rubric If your parent went on camp, please write a letter to another person and give your own parent a big hug next time you see them. _______________________________________________________________________________ 14 / 3 / 2016 > Kauri / Rimu Yaldhurst Model School Christchurch > Dear John Hello John, my name is Lucy. I am from Yaldhurst School and I was in your group for stacking tyres. I would like to thank you for an awesome camp my first one . I thought you were helpful and funny. Things I enjoyed about the camp was Hanmer Spring Hot Pools both days my favourite bring Hydro-Slides and the lazy river. I also really liked the food we had it was really tasty from Rusty Carrot Catering. I really liked how you made people laugh, and I thought you were really smart. John I'd love to ask you some questions :) My camp this year was extremely exciting. I really enjoyed spending time with my friends, playing games, eating tasty food, and hanging out in the cabins. The thing I most enjoyed was not doing any homework. I would really like to thank you for such an amazing camp. I really like what you did for the school. Yours Sincerely Lucy Ebdon Marking My CAMP LETTER What I need to do Me / 5 Buddy / 5 Mr M / 5 1. PARAGRAPHS Each paragraph is about ONE main idea. 5 4 ? 2. SENTENCE STARTERS Sentences begin with different words. 4 5 ? 3. VOCABULARY The right words (key vocab) have been used to add detail and say exactly what you mean, and make sense. 3 3 ? 4. LANGUAGE Writing makes sense. My writing flows smoothly. 4 4 ? 5. PUNCTUATION Capitals are used when needed. Full stops are used at the end of sentences. EXTRA: Commas, question marks, speech marks and exclamation marks used in the right places ( . , ! ? " "). 5 4 ? 6. HOW DID I DO? Total points (of 25 points) 21 24 ? Me: Star and a wish Star: spelling Wish writing more Buddy: Star and a wish Star: I think you did a really good job explaining to me about your camp. Wish: I think that you could talk a little more about what you enjoyed. Mr M: Star and a wish Star: Wish: